I didn't want to comment-spam you, so I picked this fic because it is really funny. You got the voices exactly right. I especially like how you show that Wilson is also perfectly capable of witty banter <3
And, in general, I think you're really good with keep dialogue in character (I also read your Death Note and Dexter fics, am sadly unfamiliar with the other fandoms).
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Date: 2009-05-26 05:04 pm (UTC)And, in general, I think you're really good with keep dialogue in character (I also read your Death Note and Dexter fics, am sadly unfamiliar with the other fandoms).